Can a Military Victory occur instantly in the Diplomacy Phase if a player gains keys through negotiation or suing for peace?

No, you must wait and see if the player still has enough keys for the Military Victory at the start of the Action Phase. His total of keys controlled may be reduced later in the Diplomacy Phase as other powers conclude agreements or sue for peace. More.

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