College Dismissal Appeal Letter? Final version?

Its not bad, maybe change "reordering" to "changing" or "re-allocating". How do you like Morrissville College? You have a deg in Massage therapy, what are you studying now?

Sports science? Med?

There's a spell check button somewhere on Microsoft word.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.