It's optional with certain adverbs, but I would just leave it there. You should have a period at the end of the sentence though. Also,"significant moments in our life are imposed upon us," should be: "significant moments in our lives are imposed upon us," or "a significant moment in our lives is imposed upon us," Just read about the comma here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comma#In_li...
Melissa Monster I have not looked at any answers to assuage my decision. Read this 3 times, and in my opinion there should not be a comma after 'imposed upon us rather' perhaps a hiccup in ones inflection and resonance but not a comma. To me it short changes the word rather and mitigates its full power in communication.
I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.