Help Building Pages: I'm building the "A Song of Ice and Fire" Mahalo Page and I need a little help?

I think your Guide Note is pretty good. I went in and added internal links for you...Take a look at that top section in "Edit" mode and see what changes I made. You should start doing that whenever you write a word in your Guide Note that you think would probably have its own Mahalo page.As for the long bit of text in your "Featured" section, I'm not worried about you spoiling too much, but it's a bit longer than it has to be.

If writing extended paragraphs in English is an issue for you, I'd keep things very simple and straightforward...one or two sentences describing the content of that video will do. Avoid being "flowery," overly elaborate or descriptive...It's totally okay with us if you just stick to the basic facts. Also, you should avoid giving your own opinion about the topic - such as when you praise Martin's writing as transformative to the fantasy genre.

I've rewritten this section, as well. Take a look to get an idea for the kind of simple, straightforward descriptions I'm describing. I'd like to see what you can do in terms of writing a Synopsis and Review subsection...Give it a try and feel free to contact me directly at [email protected] or through my profile if you want me to look over your writing or have any more questions.

Thanks for getting going on this page and for contributing to our Mahalo index of information. We appreciate it!

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