I am going to tell a girl I like her so I wrote this for her.How is it?can it be better? please suggest...?

Usually gals....dont like love-poem. Hope so she likes! Tc.

No fence homie save urself the trouble and tell her straight up.

A little bit to cheesy for me but different people like different things, maybe she will love it..

It's lovely :) Every girl dreams of a boy giving them poetry for love.

Unless she likes rap this will turn her off.

I wouldn't give that to her, it's not that it's not good..it's just corny. You have two options: 1) you probably could turn it into a song 2) you could just tell her you like her like a regular person? Haha x.

Well, the English in it is incredible for not being your first language. I'm sure she won't mind the few linguistic errors. There are very few other errors.

I think she will appreciate it for the gesture that it is, and not reject it. Good luck, friend. (I love India).

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.