If it worked, I'd probably read it. But there are so many plot holes. Humans don't, and CAN'T run off of "batteries."
Even then, how do they become glitchy? Man's source of power is food and rest. If they were to have the batteries ripped out of them they'd just get a big mac and take a huge nap and it'd be fine.
I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.