Is "twisting with his mind" a good name for a manga?

Ha ha that sounds like it would make a wicked game >..> I mean its named after laundry detergent, lol but maybe name it after the group that ordered him to kill the girl in the first place. Or maybe re-word your title. Its really up to you, what you pick but its good to get other's oppinions, I myself like the title you picked =3.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.