That's a really bad way to do it. The reason it doesn't work is because that JavaScript needs to be parsed and run by the browser first, that's a whole different story and would involve using eval(). The better way to do it would be to send back a JSON object, then use it in your JavaScript to display the message to the user.
I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.