What do you think of my journals from 5th grade? What are your critiques for any of these entries?

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They read like a fifth grader's view of things. Your interpersonal relationships sound like what I endured in grammar school (3rd-8th grade). Were you in a Catholic parochial school, too?.

1 I like the Christmas list! They are neat. Diaries are fun.

I have written down my last few years....I would rather forget...they were hard times...but it helped me have an outlet to clear my mind...get it out of me. I think dairies would make great books.

I like the Christmas list! They are neat. Diaries are fun.

I have written down my last few years....I would rather forget...they were hard times...but it helped me have an outlet to clear my mind...get it out of me. I think dairies would make great books.

2 A 30 speed bike, I never knew they made them up that high LOL! Your lucky you still have them......

A 30 speed bike, I never knew they made them up that high LOL! Your lucky you still have them......

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.