What made this person such a talented writer?

No, you are not a talented writer. The grammar and spelling greatly takes away from the story, it makes it painful to read. None of the sentences flow together, it's just a bunch of choppy adjective overflowed ideas that need to be mended together.

You gave us less than a page worth of your work, nobody can judge a story based on that. As of now, it seems overall cliche and immature. Nice try, keep writing and you will learn.

Jose, what's wrong is that you are praising her work which isn't "perfection", you have to be brutally honest every once in awhile. If you're always praised and told what you do is good, you'll never learn to become better. Melanie, if you are thanking Jose for being positive, it's clear you're overconfident and quite thick.

Who are you going to listen to? Jose, or several other top contributors (who know what they're talking about) that all agree? Your question did not indicate that you wanted us to critique the idea, it just said "Am I a talented writer?".

Writing isn't just about the idea, it's about how you put it together and present it to the audience. If you only want criticism on the idea, put that as your question.

There's no such thing as talent. There's skill, and you can earn it through hard work. I can't read this because of spelling and punctuation errors.

Punctuation and spelling are part of how we make sense to other people in our writing. Youseehowthissent4enceisverylkwoknsophar... That's because I've just violated a contract with you, wherein we speak/write/read the same language. You are making no sense to me, and even if you were paying me (rather than asking for my skill at critique to be volunteered to you) I'd hand this back and say "spellcheck it and grammar check it and put in capital letters, and then I'll look at it."

If you want someone to pat you on the head for being sloppy and demanding, stick with Mommy.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.