Doesn't look good. This is supposed to be YOUR philosophy, not ours. And a teaching philosophy is a lot more than a few strategies like your teacher listed.
How do you think students learn? What are you, as a teacher, going to do to facilitate that learning, motivate each student, and help students as individuals? Why do you think education is important?
What does it do for the student, and how will you, as a teacher, make that happen for the student?
I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.