¿Dónde me pueden corregir un texto en inglés?

People say that time flies, that time is money, that we waste time, that we kill time, that we try to save time. But, what do we really know about time? Well, like a river, time seems to flow endlessly from one moment to the next.

And the flow of time seems to always be in one direction: toward the future. But that may not be right. Discoveries over the last century has shown that much of what he think about time maybe nothing more than an illusion.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.