Grammer help needed! also let me know how can I write these sentences in much better way?

Thanks for sharing the picture. I've been looking for it since the event, without success. By the way, I read the article you posted on FB yesterday, it was great.

I've become a huge fan.

Thanks for sharing the picture (or photograph). I was searching for this image ever since I went to the event but couldn't find it. By the way, yesterday I read your article which you posted on facebook.It is great!

Thanks to it I have become a huge fan.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.