Please proofread, mainly please point out grammer issues... I am realy bad at grammer?

AHAA! I kinda think you're joking with that question ;) I'm pretty sure you know how to spell.

Because the internet makes you stupid. English butchery is an essential part of cyberspace.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.