Howdy Dave. Nice hat. Love the story. Why do you think your main character chooses to order?

He goes to order the coffee to hear her voice. To be near to her because he doesn't have the courage to ask her out. She is out of his league really.

I am glad you like the story. There is more to come....

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.