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That could be a problem with your appendix, of course you may have already gotten taken out. If it isn't though, you Need to go get checked out Now. Problems with your appendix could be fatal.

Pff, people worry so much now days, its prolly a side ache. I get them alot too. Don't start freaking out...

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.