On a scale of 1 to acid trip, how would you rate this prologue to my story?

Open space...plenty of room, a comfy place to sit, listen to some calm music (relaxing) or something called psytrance, which is a kind of psychedelic experience all on its own. You could try to have a person that keeps notes of your experiences as you willingly express them.

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I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.