Please read and comment my poem plz plz plz read my poem and comment?

............................Stuff About It....................... Clicked on ..and saw The Man in the Moon.. Reciting in verses - a limerick terse Written with savvie, and even - in verse - Of a blackguard, a bounder, a scoundrel, a clod Who`d use us - then turf us way..the mean bod! I`m glad of the warning , but - Who could it be? 0 so fine, bold and discreet`s our moon - man, Cheesey!

...................................... Your Limerick..Correction syllable - count L4...`Or (Nor?) doubt me, for a sec,`..ok? Neat - you are back! :) Lapiz.

I wish I could understand stuff lol I've got no chance working this one out :) Nice to see you :).

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.