Pls. give me your feedback about my english and articles? i'm not used in the english language yet?

I am impressed with your English skills, but it needs a lot of work. If you are serious about this, post the question in the forum Extreme Hub Makeover. You will get a lot of honest feedback.

SteveoMc is right ,you may not get good suggestions here in this section , when you put a couple of hubs in extreme makeover the pro hubbers will you a detailed critique. That would really help you move in the right direction. Practice makes perfect, keep writing and your skills are bound to improve.

Welcome to HP and best wishes!

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.