Try adding salt. If you want a good dough recipe try this.... 5 cups flour 1/2 cup vegetable oil 1 tbls yeast some salt and sugar 1 cup milk and 1 cup water 1 egg. In a bowl, water milk and oil and warm it up.
Add egg. Mix. Then add slowly to your flour mix.
Or let your mixer do the mixing for you.
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