Write a poem using volume, biased sample, unbiased sample, and faces of a figure. it doesn't have to be long...?

Your heavenly glow burns within the light of my soul, heavenly beauty." An example: This line would still make the point stated as this, "Your heavenly glowburns within my soul" OR burns bright within my soul. You need not repeat heavenly preceding beauty, "Your beauty embraces me."

Find other ways to express without repeating "beauty" Farther rather than further. Or work in "Beyond" "Lost to". Drop it the second time, the point has been made.

Lips to toes can be expressed more poertically even through allusion. "in beauty and wonder, I am lost in awe and wonder for you." you can drop this, and regarding infinity, "Stretch infinitely" Head to toe again in S 2, try some other way to express wholeness, over all of the person. "eternal, infinite beauty", can be reworked.

No matter how proficient or prolific a writer / poet is, we are all a work in progress, you clain you're not a writer, this isn't a bad effort, but always think edit, remove filler words not needed, especially repeating, or fixating on a word / words, when your point can be made more succinctly. Take constructive critism, ignore bashing. Practice may never make perfect, but it can't hurt if you're a wanna be.

Its good and I loved it. We're all learning something in poetry. One thing : Determination.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.