Can I say, or could it make sence to say "In callow I sink." grammatically in my poetry?

Can I say, or could it make sence to say "In callow I sink. " grammatically in my poetry. The reason being that its part of a song I wrote and "callowness" exceeds in syllables for the rhyme scheme for that verse... thanks for anyone who can try to answer.

Asked by haazmat 16 months ago Similar questions: make sence callow sink grammatically poetry Arts > Books > Books - Poetry.

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First, hunt up a Thesaurus. The word "callow" does exist as an adjective, such as a "callow person". In my Thesaurus copy I see "callow" has three meanings:1 young - YOUTH.

- Noun.2 bare 3 immatureFor two syllables try: "crudeness", "coarseness", "rawness", or what about "Immaturely I sink"(?) .

I think "In callowness I sink" would be more appropriate but I know there are others on here who would know for sure.

The reason being that its part of a song I wrote and "callowness" exceeds in syllables for the rhyme scheme for that verse... thanks for anyone who can try to answer. Haazmat 16 months ago .

Well, it doesn't really work, grammatically, but then again, you can always plead poetic license. :) I tried to come up with a line that would work for you, but didn't have any success. I just don't see how you are going to be able to use the word "callow" properly.It's a great word, and maybe you can use it another way, but is there something else two-syllable that you can sink into?

Katherine .

You could say it and some would understand, but...

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You could say it and some would understand, but... Gary4books 64 months ago.

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