Do you like writing poems..?

{How to make a girl a fan of yours! } today is blackened. Refusing (Yes, it is refusing, my poems abusing) to let the sun awaken you.

(awaken you? It was a token of boo) yet your favourite day (maybe I 'll come to stay!) is in the hope of tomorrow. (Who do you think I am?

Tom Morrow?) no one knows this home better than I (I care less. My instincts always on you rely) it has too many walls.... (also of many floors) my hearts hang on a peg (Was your name Peg?) one of glass (I like your mars) the others (bars) red. (in bed) the lawn is fine to roll.

I love it when I see spring is affecting writers. In my opinion your imagery is well-told and it is very nice. I would only suggest that you shorten it a bit more to have it more complicated.

It is in complexity that the reader can create the whole self-made vision. Of course it is just my opinion. The third verse is a bit unnecessarily descriptive.

And a title. I would name it either: love prison play on the grass grass-felt poems (I know the titles suck) Good luck.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.