I created a new rap and I'd like to get feedback on it please. It's a "gangsta rap". Thank you for your time.?

They both have less talent than a brain dead monkey. Why would I care about their beef.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.