Is their any one who can help me to guide me by checking my essays? please please help me out.?

I think because college gives you more freedom, and it cost money. It is also your choice to go there, it is not mandatory. Maybe that's why?

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.