Our bond, our sisterhood, friendship will remain the same till the last breathe of our lives. Kindly help me correct this sentence?

Sure: How we got here I'll never know. How much I weigh is none of your business. How well you do on the test depends on how hard you studied.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.