A High School Reunion poem, critique or comment?

It's a sort of sequel to the "Odyssey," where Ulysses, as an old man, decides he's not "done" yet and, instead of just sitting around his palace, sets out on more adventures. I'm about to have my 45th reunion so I know what that feels like :).

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.