No mal, pero hice cambios a tus frases, así suenan más naturales al inglés: 1. Thanks to you, I could overcome my fears and pull through. 2.
I hope you will follow to grow as an artist and as a person. 3. I hope you will follow to grow and I wish you the best.
I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.