Fair Warning" for C/C, Do you always heed fair warning?

The 12 beat line, notoriously difficult to render without compromise, is handled with aplomb in this mystical tale You chose your words beautifully with wisdom not only for message, but how mellifluous they role off the reader's tongue. (a must with a "12") and crafted this write with an impeccable, Iambic precision momentum and flow. I like the repetitive touch of "emblazoned sky" An admirable write, Iggy.

This composition goes in my special saved file.

Aaaaah! I hear a mortal warning but I can't tell what it is I should fear! Do I like it or do I not?

I don't know, I'm too trepidatious to think. :) I agree that the recurring "emblazoned air" is a bit heavy, especially since I can't tell what it's referencing, really. Interesting though.

It would have been interesting in the suggested category too. :D.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.