I really don't care how good/bad this poem is, it really had to be written, Comments?

Goes well with my anti cupid poems ... had to read it a coupla times as I AMNOT drunken, just sloppy tired.

My name is poet C and dis is my poetry sit back and drink some wine with me we're soaking up the liquor and sipping on the biter. Let's get happy Yap-nip , slip that drink hip-hop lets take a nap I'm not Drunk LOL Great stuff , Love it.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.