Sonnet 65" how else could you convey your words as true? Care to C/C this poem?

True love is unconditional,with no strings controlling the other. Do as I did. Take flight and move on.No use suffering with abuse.

Others will appreciate you more and not take you for granted. This line conveys factual information. When all comes down to be mostly just strife Move on and get a brand new joyful life.

Nice poem.bye...

I cannot comment on this, given my knowledge of Freudian symbolism. If intentional, it is quite funny. If not, my apologies.

Is "wonder" the word of your intent instead of "wander?" Works both ways. But I have to shut up now before I get to where your fantasy creams.

Dammit, I swore I would not go there. Nor towards your "stake at hand" and your "rigor.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.