Your sonnets and I are in the throes of an impassioned love affair. I simply adore them, and the way you stir so much emotion. You resurrect, and bring to life the beautiful sonnets of a bygone era.
It matters little if the "Iamb is messed up" Perfection, in my opinion, is mundane...
I read the iambics aloud in my mind your meaning on your wavelength somehow to find; - this works very well put to voice with expression - think of you no less for turbulent confession. .....in truth, it`s the youth in this storm which is potent .....so please, add this to your `Trial Sonnet`, quotient! :) TY.
I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.