Of course, as always, your form is perfect. I can at least count syllables on my fingers - but what I am so happily surprised about is your content. It made me feel good about myslef.
It made me feel, that even as a recluse, I have good traits as well. I have recently lost my ability to drive much of anywhere and I shun people except for my husband and parents (oh and here, of course) and your poem made me feel like - Hey! It is O.K. Good words.
Thank you for writing them. I feel like so much less of a freak now.
We are mere lowly humans and imperfect and we should be filled with joy just the same because we have been given the gift of life. Be the best we can be and do not struggle for perfection in an imperfect world. And do not deliberately cause harm.
You have brought all this to my mind with your beautiful words and intelligent reasoning. Your work is up lifting.
I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.