The read kept my attention ... as I was reading the anticipation was building . This does hold my interest to want more , I want more more is good ya know =)) I want a lot more .. I like what you've done here , I'm no poet , but it is interesting . Vignette / poetry ... I likey I likey :D?
I have only to say that I found it very hard hitting right from "Granddad was" and I have a feeling I know where this is going because I am possibly reading too much "between" the lines.. (-: Well written (((Bri))) I shall await the rest happilly with baited breath. Ps.. I commend your reply to the responses you have had. It is a real man that can keep a civil tongue in his head when all about you are losing theirs (.
I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.