Don't be dissapointed by others comments. You have the first step correct. You have written something from your heart.
Next, try and get a thesaurus from the library. It lists words of similar meanings of a word. Try searching for words at the end of each line that would make the poem have a rhyme but maintian the meaning that you are trying to convey.
You clearly have a creative mind, I can tell that by the meaning of your poem. Don't give up just because of stupid comments from other users. Hope this helps.
Good life. Cheers.
I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.