Writers: How "rough" is your rough draft?

Simply amazing poem. I wouldn't be able to find another word for it other than amazing and impeccable. I would never be able to give improvements on such a poem, as my poems are so amateur compared to this piece of work - but down to personal preference, a definite 10/10, and if anything, one of my fav.

Poems I have ever read. I especially love from the third stanza onwards. Keep up the good work Peter!

Yowee Peter, I enjoyed the historical perceptions but not the reflections of what historically could have been me. I think it deserves a TU and star which I respectfully give, however it brought back memories I hoped not to relive.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.