It seems that acoustics are a bit abstract in the poem. Try to focus when you writ (This poem was written about a writer's block during a writer's block in my teen years.) How many people have had that writer's block in your teen years and why should we or you remember it now that we are all grown ups? I do not understand the poem.
Meaningless lines that have not much to say. But I am a foreign critic of poetry. Maybe some English native speakers will explain my aporias and enlighten me.
That's why I have only 9,500 points. (I was lazy you see, and a not a very good poet like them.) Thank you.
I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.