Please C & C a new very rough draft, will you?

Wow- The poem tickles my taste and made me serious about present time but made me smile for the beautiful rhyme poem getting faster. I think you have provided a synopsis of evil emotions which are taking place for demolition. I love how you constructed the poem to prove your wonderful point that .....hatred spreads,agony abounds,the new word genocide has taken control and I love the ...... abandonment of kindness .acceptance.

So great thinking . Well done by the way,this is brilliant poem. Keep it up.

Amazing. You compressed world culture in a magnificent poem. Question: knew it was important to record events as even more; <----- should the semi-colon be there?

Evolution of mankind from stone ages And maybe a comma? Excuses from dictators <-- after dictators? Nuclear power with I think this part needs different punctuation: ~ Excuses from dictators{.

} {N}uclear power with the capability to destroy humanity{,} {e}nd wars and obliterate the shields and spheres unique to earth to keep it green begin to decay{. } {T}he hot house melting the ice caps{,} turning the land masses to water{;} islands of ice float away from the poles. It is really a great poem.

I don't usually see punctuation as important, but for this masterpiece it might make it more readable. Or, it might not, because the punctuation might change the speed that builds. Really, I don't know.

I love the poem.

I cant really gove you an answer,but what I can give you is a way to a solution, that is you have to find the anglde that you relate to or peaks your interest. A good paper is one that people get drawn into because it reaches them ln some way.As for me WW11 to me, I think of the holocaust and the effect it had on the survivors, their families and those who stood by and did nothing until it was too late.